Reply To: Week 2 Posts – November 28th Home › Forums › Hauled Off and Hit – Workshop Forum › Week 2 Posts – November 28th › Reply To: Week 2 Posts – November 28th November 27, 2021 at 2:05 pm #18951 erin feldmanParticipant Ooooooooo, that descending pyramid of emotional carnage in the last stanza is precise and so satisfying: both graphically and the word choices. Before that, I wanted more “story”, more logic. e
