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Reply To: Week 2 Posts – November 28th

Home › Forums › Hauled Off and Hit – Workshop Forum › Week 2 Posts – November 28th › Reply To: Week 2 Posts – November 28th

November 27, 2021 at 2:05 pm #18951
erin feldman
Participant

Ooooooooo, that descending pyramid of emotional carnage in the last stanza is precise and so satisfying: both graphically and the word choices. Before that, I wanted more “story”, more logic.
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