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Anonymous

erin, with a little e.

This was a trip that I enjoyed!
Particularly from the dogs on down. It just kept getting better.

Your ask was for feedback specific to story so I’ll share that I could do without the second stanza’s asides in parenthesis.

That said, that’s just how my ears saw it.