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erin feldman
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Damn. I mean I read the CW, but Damn!!! anyway…or, see what Jessica said elegantly and I have said like a high schooler.

I loved:
in an empty room on a maternity ward as other
mothers are bathing babies. I am far
too old for the crying out.

That image evokes, for me, “bleeding out” because of the motherhood/pregnancy subject; and maybe that’s an example of the hard hitting images Jessica is nudging editing towards.
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