Reply To: Week 2 Posts – November 28th

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erin feldman
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There is something honest to these abstractions, as you said. And it is exactly what you feared: I see more of you than you thought you would like for us to. Aaaand, I agree with you, that is the point. The frightening, fuel for growth kind of point.

Also, I don’t know how you snuck into my heart and stole this line:

Give me long enough, and my grace will speak so loud you’ll mistake it for my ego. I swear.

more fav lines (definitely out of order):
I know the mercy begged for powder kegs just so it could turn to light.

The haphazard and the glorious,

So find me in the quiet hour…/Dreaming about the kind of love the rapture is made of

xo
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