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November 28, 2021 at 8:51 am
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Here are the lines I loved,
“warm glisten of Bushmills
buzzing down my central channel
toasting tongue to toes.”
And the hedge of feral howling, was a wow for me. I agree with Seth so far as the parenthesis. They break up the flow just a smidge for me.
Thank you for sharing, erin!