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Victoria Ruiz
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Here are the lines I loved,
“warm glisten of Bushmills
buzzing down my central channel
toasting tongue to toes.”

And the hedge of feral howling, was a wow for me. I agree with Seth so far as the parenthesis. They break up the flow just a smidge for me.

Thank you for sharing, erin!