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“My arms itch / to break the window” is a great line with a *perfectly* placed line break.

“I feel a thousand planes taking off inside of me”; “I grab the paper as if I were held in custody for breaking a rule”; “Each question is repeated three times, not for a charm” — your piece speaks anxiety not like it invented the concept, but like it was forced to master it.

And closing with “unleashed” is a nice echo for “I obey, like a dog” in the poem’s middle. Thank you for sharing this with us.