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ugh awesome. so many good moments.

“it always made me want to roll my DNA across the dinner table and say, show me on the double helix where god lives, I’d like to work on our chemistry.”

“I never stopped jumping for joy. I just got better at hiding the small leaps for mankind”

“We have got to learn how to discuss the pachyderm in the room without becoming poachers.”

I love how this poem weaves back on itself with imagery and themes. I also didn’t get the Mythbusters line and got lost a bit in the rest of the ending. The last line with the dolphin, felt the yearning and sacrifice but didn’t get the image so much. Maybe bringing back the space or magic theme would wrap it up nicely?