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Hey Kate, thanks again for sharing your work with us!

This is really interesting subject matter — being a foreign correspondent, that is. I imagine maybe it’s the real experience of someone you know (a reporter, not the dying bit) in which case, dang! They must have a laundry list of stories that just never ends. Plus a ton of great lines!

There’s a lot hinted at here that means repeat readings allow the reader’s mind to wander through a lot of potential scenarios. It does become a little hard to parse the reality of the situation once everyone dies of the “implosion”. Also, an implosion isn’t a very common occurrence so it leaves me with some questions that are maybe more distracting than value adding. Dunno, might be worth looking at and thinking about?