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erin feldman
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and made love to the crumbs
WHOA– that ending! It lacerated me, but also made me sure I’m not alone making out with hopelessness (I translated crumbs). There are some verbs in here that are lifting the heavy of feelings off the page and into me: crumbling, gorged, skewered

That middle couplet (why do all greek restaurants employ the same font?/why is solitude so difficult to sit with?) could be the place to unpack for us. I’m really curious about that connection, but right now I don’t “get” it.
xo